Los Yumas En La Luna

The deadline is more like Marco's Dec 31st. I've had some viral problems. It will be good though. I promise.

You can see an out-of-the-car window background for the current thing at:

Better yet, you can see my OTL submission with yumas intro at:

...whatever, my first thing sucks. Who's first movie doesn't?

The running background is perfect!! And its weird that i never saw your OTL submission until now! But now I have, its fun as heck!! The intro is really creative, and I can tell that if you had the money you'd out-FX lucas himself :) The FX you did are simple but effective, you timed well the responses to your other selves, and in the actual film, you were smart to never show the aliens close up, always left them in the shadows, and indeed, the audience does a better job than any CGI to imagine them as anything they may be like.

I didnt you know you could act too! A teeny bit over the top (like my own film, not like I'm better), kinda reminded me of Ash Williams in Army of Darkness. Fun, fun stuff.. and the bit at the end about angels was a very nice touch. Fun fun fun, you should submit it as an actual film instead of just a blog!

I won't submit it because I know I can do so much better. Thanks for watching!

You should still re-use the skit at the beginning with the producer. I still find it very funny.

I turned it into a five minute short. I hope to be done editing it soon. Thanks for watching it. The short film itself lacked characters and a story. It was good practice for a first thing.

J

I really enjoyed the intro and look forward to seeing it as a stand alone short. 

"The thing to determine conclusively is whether you are in a comedy or a tragedy."--Dr. Jules Hilbert, Stranger Than Fiction

It's more of the same but just a little further along the journey. This time they all happen in a very different location.

the ambient in the forest as well as some shoots that
have so much strong visuals
amazing work, great visuals

right?... :)

I am working on the trailer now expected to be finished by the end of the month. Yes, it's a trailer. Sorry for posting dates. Sorry for all of my shortcomings.

Visit www.jayyuma.com as I continue to get things together.

Sincerely,

Jay Yuma

Artist

Mur ruM coming soon! I posted it halfway done then took it off. Give me 1 month.

cant wait to see it!!!!!!!!