Werewolf Sluts From Hell

 
You know, I enjoyed the middle of this story best of all.

The beginning, it was hard for me to sympathize with the two little scumbags, drug-rapist (and eventually outed as necrophiliacs), but Tyler's lines are all winners: Tyler Makes Me Laugh. They're kinda like.. the evil version of Beavis and Butthead.

Many many good jokes all throughout. It seems the comedy aspect doesnt come just from the premise, but from the jokes planted everywhere in the script. The middle, like I said, was the best part, and this makes your script a rarity! Most scripts hang in the middle, yours shines!

The ending, we got a story of comeuppance, ... to be quite honest, I'm not sure if we even needed Veronica... it felt a little Deus Ex. Plus, how do we square the fact that the wolves were raised by Jack, with the conversation the wolves had in the ladies bathroom? It seemed then Jack and Tyler were just the snack of the week, nothing more.

Anyway, I was genuinely sorry to see Tyler meet his end, although it was hillarious as always! Tyler is my favorite character here, like a criminal Beavis. The end felt a little surreal, overall its a fun entry, solid stuff man! 

Marco likened your duo to an evil Beavis and Butt-Head.  I was picturing those dudes from Night at the Roxbury.  Either way, this script is really funny!  I love it when chicks are the ones kicking ass!  Too much fun! 

The douchbagginess of the douchebags felt a bit forced.  They felt like characters from a Hostel movie...the end was a nice twist, though Marco has a point that it contrasts a bit with the conversation in the bathroom.  Also, I'm not entirely sure what Veronica's going to do with the head at the end...but maybe I don't want to know.