Middle of Nowhere

Didn't quite get the concept, but it looked good. Maybe it should've been longer?

More detail about the characters and why they were in that particular "loop" would've been nice.

Just my 2 cents.

Good Luck! 

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i think if the film were longer and allowed to breath, i believe it will be less confusing.

 Sir, when you posted in your profile that your inspirations were Hitchcock and Serling, you werent kidding. I loved this.

This is my kind of film. I loved every part of it, and I could tell it was some sort of loop from the moment I recognize her clothes when she laid across the road the first time around. There are two films I would love you to watch, the first one is LOOP by Pericles. He's a KarmaCritic member, but hasnt posted Loop here yet, so I'll have to send you to the On The Lot site, much to my chagrin:

http://films.thelot.com/films/10434

The second one, well, its my film. Its weird too. Or so people say. And thats why I think that maybe you'll be able to forgive the flaws and get it :) Its here:

http://www.karmacritic.com/node/9

I'm so looking forward to seeing more of your work! In fact, this film becomes the third I add to my favorites! 

I see a great amount of potential in your writing and directing. With another person working as your producer that isn't afraid to step in creatively, you will definitely go somewhere. Film is a team effort, it's hard when your independent, but always good to have a fellow filmmaker tha tthinks similarly to you but has something new to give you to help make YOUR project better. I agree with FableForge, I see a lot of Hitchcock style here, but the other comments are just as constructive, you needed to give this film time to breath. It was so complex but condensed, dont get me wrong u executed it nicely, but you could've done this with a ten minute to tie things together a little more smoothly.